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This is a list of errors or clarifications for the book [[Computing with Robots]].
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== Errata for Fall 2009 (current) version ==
  
# p.228: '''takePicture)''' should be '''takePicture()''' [missing paren]
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This is a list of errors or clarifications for the book [[Learning Computing With Robots]]. Feel free to add to this list. Please indicate the error/issue/comment and the page number printed on the page (not the page number in the PDF).
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# Page 107: getObstacle() Returns a list containing the two values of all IR sensors. Clearly copied from the definition of getIR() on the previous page. The definition of the parameterized version of getObstacle() is correct, but the two-valued definition is made more believable because the picture on p.108 would suggest that there are indeed only two obstacle sensors.
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# Page 123: Previous getObstacle error is propagated in the summary on p.123
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The following are very minor typos that don't really affect the content of the book:
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# Page 6: Add a comma in the fist sentence of the last paragraph on the page ("The Scribbler robot, shown here''',''' is..").
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# Page 26: In the 5th sentence of the first paragraph, change "than" to "that" ("... there are several other factors '''that''' can contribute...").
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# Page 44: Add a comma to the first sentence of the second paragraph ("... as you have seen so far''',''' is intricately...").
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# Page 89: In the fourth sentence of the first full paragraph, change "an" to "a" ("There is also '''a''' similar LED...");
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# Page 107: In the last sentence of the first paragraph change "places" to "placed" ("... sensors are '''placed''' far enough apart...").
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# Page 114: In the last sentence of the first full paragraph change "is" to "in", and "picture on previous page" to "above picture" ("Game pads come '''in''' all...", and "... shown in the '''above''' picture.").
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# Page 132: The indicated range of sensor values is wrong.  On my scribbler the go upwards of 65,000.  The last paragraph on this page should be reworded to reflect this.
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# Page 139: Parentheses are missing in the equation for standard deviation formulas.  In the formula there should be parentheses around 2*sigma squared, and in the return statement parentheses should be similarly added ("return exp(-(v-mean)**2/'''('''2*(stddev**2)''')''')" ).
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# Page 202: All occurrences of "refraction" should be replaced with "rarefaction".
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# Page 228: The first full sentence should have "pixels" instead of "pixel" ("... value of each of the '''pixels''' in the new image...").
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# Page 301: In the second sentence of the "Space and Time Complexity" section, change "lets" to "let's" and remove "us" ("To make things interesting, '''let's''' add a restriction...") .
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== Errata for Fall 2008 version ==
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[[Image:GamePadlegendV2.jpg|thumb|right|'''Corrected image of Gamdpad Controller Buttons (Button 3 and 4 are switched in the text.]]
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;Pages 14, 114: Please replace the Gamepad Controller image with the one shown here on the right. You can click on the image to get a larger, full-page printable version to keep. or you can [[http://wiki.roboteducation.org/wiki/images/5/55/GamePadlegendV2TN.jpg click here]] for an image the same size as in the text (almost) so it can be cut and pasted in the text.
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;Page 15: In '''4. Explore a little further''': Fix font of '''SPEED''' in '''SPEED can be'''.
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;Page 26: line 3: replace '''backwards(1)''' by '''backward(1)'''.
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;Page 27: def yoyo(): There should be a call to stop() after the two statements in the function definition
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;Page 29: def yoyo(): There should not be a call to stop() in the definition (see correction for page 27 above)
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;Page 68: Exercises restart numbering back at 1 (rather than continuing with 6).
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;Page 74: line 5 of last paragraph: replace '''tranalate(1.0)''' by '''translate(1.0)'''.
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;Page 77: on line 2 of second paragraph: replace '''randrange''' by '''randint'''.
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;Page 81: last code example on this page should read:
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<pre>
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forward(1.0)
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wait(3.0)
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stop()
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</pre>
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;Page 82: Add the stop() command at the end of first two examples on this page:
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<pre>
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while timeRemaining(3.0):
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    forward(1.0)
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stop()
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</pre>
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Also,
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<pre>
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startTime = currentTime()
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while (currentTime - startTime) < 3.0:
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    forward(1.0)
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stop()
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</pre>
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;Page 92: replace dfinition of '''randrange''' by that of '''randint'''. Also fix the paragraph spacing in the definition of '''random''' just above.
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;Page 94: '''moth will have''' should be '''month will have'''.
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;Page 114: See correction for Page 14 above.
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;Page 116: last line of section: replace '''See Exercise YY''' by '''See Exercise 6'''.
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;Page 147: In the code, the comment after '''turnSpeed''' wraps onto the next line
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;Page 190: In a graphics window with width, W and height H (i.e WxH pixels) the pixel
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(0, 0) is at the top _left_ corner and the pixel (199, 299) will be at the bottom
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right corner. That is, x-coordinates increase as you go right and y-coordinates
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increase as you go left.
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;Pages 210-211: Add definitions of '''getP1''' and '''getP2'''. These return the end points (Point object) of the Line object.
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;Page 213: Fix the font of all the '''beep''' examples.
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;Pages 238-239: Add definition of '''getBlob''' in Myro Review.
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;Page 246: Fix page number in footer to appear on the left corner.
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;Page 251: Description on how to play Tic Tac Toe is missing. For now [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tic-tac-toe see here].
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;Page 256: first line of text on the page: replace '''write a two more''' by '''write two more'''.
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;Page 266: The following sentence in the largest paragraph on this page: <br>
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"Since the relationship between the choices is cyclical the strategy
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can be implemented by picking the thing that beats the opponent’s pervious
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move beats." <br>
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should read: <br>
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"Since the relationship between the choices is cyclical the strategy
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can be implemented by picking the thing that beats the opponent’s pervious
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move."
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;Page 270: last line of Exercise 2 has a typo: "pr0ogram" should be "program".
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;Page 303: Italicize the font of '''polynomial time''' on last line of second bullet item.
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;Page 303: line 3 of first paragraph: replace '''speed on the''' by '''speed of the'''.
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;Page 304: line 1 of third paragraph: replace '''vocabulary of''' by '''vocabulary for'''.
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;Page 304: line 7 of third paragraph: replace '''in a an equivalence class''' by '''in an equivalence class'''.
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;Page 318: Last three lines of the second paragraph should be italicized: '''In the morning paper...Thanks!'''.
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;Page 324: Under Chapter 4 replace definition of '''randrange''' with '''randint'''.
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;Page 337: Fix font for definition of '''getPixel(<picture>, x, y)'''.
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== Errata for June 2008 version ==
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Thank you all for sending these corrections. We have incorporated these (and others) in the Fall 2008 version of the text.
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This is a list of errors or clarifications for the book [[Learning Computing With Robots]].
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# p.228, Chapter 9: '''takePicture)''' should be '''takePicture()''' [missing paren]
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# p. 64, Chapter 3: The link to American Scientist no longer works; the page seems to have been taken down.
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# p. 50, Chapter 3: January spelled wrong in comments of program.
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# p. 29, Chapter 2: '''backward, waitTime)''' should be '''backward(speed, waitTime)'''
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# p. 92, Chapter 5: '''TakePicture(“gray”)''' should be '''takePicture("gray")''' [incorrect capitalization]
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# p. 134, Chapter 6:
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  # decide how to act based on sensors values
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  if (L - R) > thresh:
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      # left is seeing less light than right so turn right
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      turnRight(1.0)
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  elif (L - R) < thresh:
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      # right is seeing less light than left, so turn left
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      turnLeft(1.0)
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  else:
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      # the difference is less than the threshold, stay put     
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      stop()
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  Should the elif statement be '''elif (R-L)>thresh:''' or '''elif (L-R)<-thresh:'''?
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# p. 158, Chapter 7: no periods in top paragraph
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# p. 182, Chapter 8: In Main and in the pictured graphics window, "Cicrles" should read "Circles".
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# p. 192, Chapter 8: '''The second tone is exactly one octave above middle C.''' should read '''The second tone is exactly one octave above the first.''' .
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# p. 193, Chapter 8: '''C#4/Db4 = 261.63* 2^(1/2) = 277.18''' should say 2^(1/12) instead of 2^(1/2), with the same correction for D#4/Eb4.
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# p. 194, Chapter 8: The last note in the scales should be the C with the octave number increased by one. Also, the scales are chromatic (rather than major or minor).
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# p. 179, Chapter 8: In the image on the page, the title of the Graphics Window should be "My Masterpiece".
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# p. 201, Chapter 8: I do not understand exercise 5.

Latest revision as of 18:50, 22 September 2010

Errata for Fall 2009 (current) version

This is a list of errors or clarifications for the book Learning Computing With Robots. Feel free to add to this list. Please indicate the error/issue/comment and the page number printed on the page (not the page number in the PDF).

  1. Page 107: getObstacle() Returns a list containing the two values of all IR sensors. Clearly copied from the definition of getIR() on the previous page. The definition of the parameterized version of getObstacle() is correct, but the two-valued definition is made more believable because the picture on p.108 would suggest that there are indeed only two obstacle sensors.
  2. Page 123: Previous getObstacle error is propagated in the summary on p.123


The following are very minor typos that don't really affect the content of the book:

  1. Page 6: Add a comma in the fist sentence of the last paragraph on the page ("The Scribbler robot, shown here, is..").
  2. Page 26: In the 5th sentence of the first paragraph, change "than" to "that" ("... there are several other factors that can contribute...").
  3. Page 44: Add a comma to the first sentence of the second paragraph ("... as you have seen so far, is intricately...").
  4. Page 89: In the fourth sentence of the first full paragraph, change "an" to "a" ("There is also a similar LED...");
  5. Page 107: In the last sentence of the first paragraph change "places" to "placed" ("... sensors are placed far enough apart...").
  6. Page 114: In the last sentence of the first full paragraph change "is" to "in", and "picture on previous page" to "above picture" ("Game pads come in all...", and "... shown in the above picture.").
  7. Page 132: The indicated range of sensor values is wrong. On my scribbler the go upwards of 65,000. The last paragraph on this page should be reworded to reflect this.
  8. Page 139: Parentheses are missing in the equation for standard deviation formulas. In the formula there should be parentheses around 2*sigma squared, and in the return statement parentheses should be similarly added ("return exp(-(v-mean)**2/(2*(stddev**2)))" ).
  9. Page 202: All occurrences of "refraction" should be replaced with "rarefaction".
  10. Page 228: The first full sentence should have "pixels" instead of "pixel" ("... value of each of the pixels in the new image...").
  11. Page 301: In the second sentence of the "Space and Time Complexity" section, change "lets" to "let's" and remove "us" ("To make things interesting, let's add a restriction...") .

Errata for Fall 2008 version

Error creating thumbnail: /bin/bash: /usr/bin/convert: No such file or directory

Error code: 127
Corrected image of Gamdpad Controller Buttons (Button 3 and 4 are switched in the text.
Pages 14, 114
Please replace the Gamepad Controller image with the one shown here on the right. You can click on the image to get a larger, full-page printable version to keep. or you can [click here] for an image the same size as in the text (almost) so it can be cut and pasted in the text.
Page 15
In 4. Explore a little further: Fix font of SPEED in SPEED can be.
Page 26
line 3: replace backwards(1) by backward(1).
Page 27
def yoyo(): There should be a call to stop() after the two statements in the function definition
Page 29
def yoyo(): There should not be a call to stop() in the definition (see correction for page 27 above)
Page 68
Exercises restart numbering back at 1 (rather than continuing with 6).
Page 74
line 5 of last paragraph: replace tranalate(1.0) by translate(1.0).
Page 77
on line 2 of second paragraph: replace randrange by randint.
Page 81
last code example on this page should read:
forward(1.0)
wait(3.0)
stop()
Page 82
Add the stop() command at the end of first two examples on this page:
while timeRemaining(3.0):
    forward(1.0)
stop()

Also,

startTime = currentTime()
while (currentTime - startTime) < 3.0:
    forward(1.0)
stop()
Page 92
replace dfinition of randrange by that of randint. Also fix the paragraph spacing in the definition of random just above.
Page 94
moth will have should be month will have.
Page 114
See correction for Page 14 above.
Page 116
last line of section: replace See Exercise YY by See Exercise 6.
Page 147
In the code, the comment after turnSpeed wraps onto the next line
Page 190
In a graphics window with width, W and height H (i.e WxH pixels) the pixel

(0, 0) is at the top _left_ corner and the pixel (199, 299) will be at the bottom right corner. That is, x-coordinates increase as you go right and y-coordinates increase as you go left.

Pages 210-211
Add definitions of getP1 and getP2. These return the end points (Point object) of the Line object.
Page 213
Fix the font of all the beep examples.
Pages 238-239
Add definition of getBlob in Myro Review.
Page 246
Fix page number in footer to appear on the left corner.
Page 251
Description on how to play Tic Tac Toe is missing. For now see here.
Page 256
first line of text on the page: replace write a two more by write two more.
Page 266
The following sentence in the largest paragraph on this page:

"Since the relationship between the choices is cyclical the strategy can be implemented by picking the thing that beats the opponent’s pervious move beats."
should read:
"Since the relationship between the choices is cyclical the strategy can be implemented by picking the thing that beats the opponent’s pervious move."

Page 270
last line of Exercise 2 has a typo: "pr0ogram" should be "program".
Page 303
Italicize the font of polynomial time on last line of second bullet item.
Page 303
line 3 of first paragraph: replace speed on the by speed of the.
Page 304
line 1 of third paragraph: replace vocabulary of by vocabulary for.
Page 304
line 7 of third paragraph: replace in a an equivalence class by in an equivalence class.
Page 318
Last three lines of the second paragraph should be italicized: In the morning paper...Thanks!.
Page 324
Under Chapter 4 replace definition of randrange with randint.
Page 337
Fix font for definition of getPixel(<picture>, x, y).


Errata for June 2008 version

Thank you all for sending these corrections. We have incorporated these (and others) in the Fall 2008 version of the text.

This is a list of errors or clarifications for the book Learning Computing With Robots.

  1. p.228, Chapter 9: takePicture) should be takePicture() [missing paren]
  2. p. 64, Chapter 3: The link to American Scientist no longer works; the page seems to have been taken down.
  3. p. 50, Chapter 3: January spelled wrong in comments of program.
  4. p. 29, Chapter 2: backward, waitTime) should be backward(speed, waitTime)
  5. p. 92, Chapter 5: TakePicture(“gray”) should be takePicture("gray") [incorrect capitalization]
  6. p. 134, Chapter 6:
  # decide how to act based on sensors values 
  if (L - R) > thresh: 
     # left is seeing less light than right so turn right 
     turnRight(1.0) 
  elif (L - R) < thresh: 
     # right is seeing less light than left, so turn left 
     turnLeft(1.0) 
  else: 
     # the difference is less than the threshold, stay put       
     stop() 
  Should the elif statement be elif (R-L)>thresh: or elif (L-R)<-thresh:?
  1. p. 158, Chapter 7: no periods in top paragraph
  2. p. 182, Chapter 8: In Main and in the pictured graphics window, "Cicrles" should read "Circles".
  3. p. 192, Chapter 8: The second tone is exactly one octave above middle C. should read The second tone is exactly one octave above the first. .
  4. p. 193, Chapter 8: C#4/Db4 = 261.63* 2^(1/2) = 277.18 should say 2^(1/12) instead of 2^(1/2), with the same correction for D#4/Eb4.
  5. p. 194, Chapter 8: The last note in the scales should be the C with the octave number increased by one. Also, the scales are chromatic (rather than major or minor).
  6. p. 179, Chapter 8: In the image on the page, the title of the Graphics Window should be "My Masterpiece".
  7. p. 201, Chapter 8: I do not understand exercise 5.